quinta-feira, 11 de março de 2010

Corinthians Tie

Corinthians played the last wensday agaisnt Indepiedente Medelin, at Colombia and the game didnt had the score that the corinthians fans expected. The game finshed with a result of 1 x 1, but the sensation was that the team which Corinthians was playing was not so good, and the result could definatly be better. Corintihans scored in the last minutes with Dentinho, who came out of the bench and scored a beatuiful goal. Ronaldo the player which everyone deposite all of the faith, didnt correspond and the fans are starting to complain with his performecens. Corinthins now faces Santo Andre and the if the team looses the chances of the midia start to perform an pressure for the Corintihans players are huge. So common Corinthinas lets react!
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  1. Alisha Stafford Feitosa19 de março de 2010 às 05:05

    This is a good post, and I appreciate the mixture of basic information and personal opinion.

    Now just try to proofread for small grammar mistakes (there are several here that I think you can catch if you're careful): "the game didnt had," "definatly," "who came out of the bench," "beatuiful," "the player which everyone deposite all of the faith, didnt correspond," "complain with his performecens," "looses," "an pressure for the Corintihans players are," "commmon," and "lets."

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